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The ultimate freedom
the freedom to leave
I've packed my memories
and spoke wishes into stars:
To be ready to leave this chapter
To grow strong
And they will whisper
She has left the planet
And I will laugh
from that vast space of new realm
Becoming a tender garden of life
in this sea of wonders released
deeply inhaled colors keep me warm
I found myself again
The ultimate freedom
the freedom to leave
She has left the planet
the freedom to leave
I've packed my memories
and spoke wishes into stars:
To be ready to leave this chapter
To grow strong
And they will whisper
She has left the planet
And I will laugh
from that vast space of new realm
Becoming a tender garden of life
in this sea of wonders released
deeply inhaled colors keep me warm
I found myself again
The ultimate freedom
the freedom to leave
She has left the planet
*freedom quote is inspired by one of N.Gaiman's quotes.
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I think this is beautifully written and the subject is deep and meaningful. It's certainly full of hope.
I take it that the poem itself was inspired by the quotes, and I think you've done a great job of creating this piece.
I take it that the poem itself was inspired by the quotes, and I think you've done a great job of creating this piece.