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The ultimate freedom
the freedom to leave


I've packed my memories
and spoke wishes into stars:
To be ready to leave this chapter
To grow strong

And they will whisper
She has left the planet
And I will laugh
from that vast space of new realm

Becoming a tender garden of life
in this sea of wonders released
deeply inhaled colors keep me warm

I found myself again

The ultimate freedom
the freedom to leave



She has left the planet
*freedom quote is inspired by one of N.Gaiman's quotes.
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FullMetalMono's avatar
I think this is beautifully written and the subject is deep and meaningful. :) It's certainly full of hope.

I take it that the poem itself was inspired by the quotes, and I think you've done a great job of creating this piece. :)